I really liked this. I loved Ransom's sulkiness, and Pace's single-minded knightliness (chivalry), and their wonderfully oblivious relationship. Ransom's scale made me wince a lot.
My only complaint is that it doesn't feel quite finished, but if you say there is a sequel in the works, that's all good!
I am going through Firefox, clearing out my tabs...
Date: 8/26/07 03:03 pm (UTC)My only complaint is that it doesn't feel quite finished, but if you say there is a sequel in the works, that's all good!