I liked this story a lot! The bawdy ballad in the first section made me laugh and laugh. Did you make it up yourself, or did you just hear it somewhere?
Anyway, they're cute. I love the way the slightly antagonistic, cooperative rivalry turned into friendship! There had better be another section where things develop further.
I also hope that whoever is being evil and using Ransom's scale doesn't harm him seriously. Or will Pace be sent on a quest to reclaim it?
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Date: 8/23/07 04:22 pm (UTC)Anyway, they're cute. I love the way the slightly antagonistic, cooperative rivalry turned into friendship! There had better be another section where things develop further.
I also hope that whoever is being evil and using Ransom's scale doesn't harm him seriously. Or will Pace be sent on a quest to reclaim it?
Much love!