Editing: copy edit time!

Best comment I left for my editor during the last rewrite of this story:

“Decided that I hadn’t stabbed enough people in the feels so I reworked this section."

Also, editing cat has reported for duty now that I've put a blanket on the desk. He was very unhappy that it was not already in place. He also keeps trying to steal my chair every time I get up, because cats.

Necromancer story (original, fragment)

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